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Post by eldradir on Jan 14, 2006 19:36:42 GMT 10
www.freewebs.com/eldradir/mawarning1.htmHere you go peoples, the above is a link to the first five chapters of my story "Eldradir". Rather than pasting it in this topic (its WAY to big), I decided to put it on my own website. Please read if you get the chance to, and if you have any reviews/comments/whatever (on both the story and the website  ), feel free to leave them here. I am most definately open to any suggestions, and love a bit of !!!<<<!!!CONSTRUCTIVE!!!>>>!!! criticism (I hope I didnt overdo that  ). For those you have previously read my story on fictionpress, note that any updates from now on will be on my website only. I'm accepting the advice of several people and no longer posting on fictionpress (I hope to have it published one day). SANKOO ;D
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Post by Akuma Ookami on Jan 16, 2006 19:28:56 GMT 10
Can you type a summary of it, please?
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Post by eldradir on Jan 19, 2006 15:13:40 GMT 10
Sorry for the slow reply... Umm... Summary... Sounds like a plan ;D
Ill get working on that right away. That and finishing chapter 6... Yep, I'm going to be a very busy person tonight methinks
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Post by eldradir on Jan 21, 2006 15:11:02 GMT 10
Yay! Chapter 6 finished and posted... Now all I gotta do is write that damn summary (why is somthing as simple as a summary such a task to me?)
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Post by Shadowed Writer on Jan 25, 2006 14:41:30 GMT 10
We need a summary still, darl.
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Post by YahNe on Jan 27, 2006 20:02:10 GMT 10
Ayaesha kicks ass! ^-^
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Post by eldradir on Jan 28, 2006 8:31:56 GMT 10
Ah, at long last. Here is the summary you guys have been wanting (sorry for the long wait)
When Eldradir – last survivor of an ancient civilisation, falls for the mysterious Melaina – daughter of a powerful Warlock, both their worlds suddenly take a drastic turn for the worse. Battles rage on in faraway lands, threatening to destroy everything they hold sacred; and without warning the couple is thrown into the middle of a war. The world lingers of the edge of destruction, and the only one who can save it wishes the two lovers dead…
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Post by Akuma Ookami on Jan 28, 2006 8:38:16 GMT 10
Ooo, I gotta make time to read that. ;D
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Post by eldradir on Jan 28, 2006 9:40:34 GMT 10
That would be much appreciated  |
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Post by eldradir on Mar 1, 2006 8:43:24 GMT 10
Chapter 7's up. YAY! ^^;
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Post by eldradir on Mar 19, 2006 8:16:45 GMT 10
On the off chance of anyone caring, Chapters 8 and 9 are now up. Chapter 10 should be on by late tonight
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Post by Karasu on Mar 19, 2006 15:18:18 GMT 10
Sounds like a trashy romance novel -- what makes it different? What in the summary will catch a male's attention -- a non-girly male's attention at that?
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Post by Fractured Princess on Mar 19, 2006 15:29:31 GMT 10
Matt why the hell did you have to post something on here if all you're going to say is "Meh" and then go on to say that you'll be reading raunchy gay Potter/Malfoy fics? Honestly, if you've got nothing constructive to say, then don't say anything. As for Rasu, that's as sonstructive as it gets. Rekon you'll read the story though? The summary does it NO justice. (Is a fan of it. And can't help but love the character he's built for her precious little Melaina). Yes I love Mel what of it?  |
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Post by eldradir on Mar 19, 2006 17:23:24 GMT 10
C10 is up... And what makes it different... Umm, I really dont know ^^ . Every guy that has read it but (Cameron, Isaac, Malcolm...) have absolutely loved it but. Hell, everyone has absolutely loved it full stop . I guess u'll just have to trust the opinion of a fellow guy that I wouldnt lower my standards to writing a trashy romance novel And yeah, that summary was a 5 second job that wasnt really meant to appeal to anyone. I just wrote it to shut these people up ;D |
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Post by YahNe on Mar 19, 2006 17:30:48 GMT 10
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), feel free to leave them here. I am most definately open to any suggestions, and love a bit of !!!<<<!!!CONSTRUCTIVE!!!>>>!!! criticism (I hope I didnt overdo that 
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