Night's Embrace

[eldradir]

Damn Mekka is making me share all my poetry from now on with her... So I figured if thats the case, I may as well post the stuff here for all of you to read ;D . If you read this, you MUST leave a comment!!


Night’s Embrace
David Budden

Gazing abroad in the wake of night
Retreating below the craggy peak
Its last glow diminished, warmth undone
A new world born in the absence of light

The flames of twilight burn away
Its charred remains adorn the sky
Washing all with comforting chill
Weak is the sun, it dare not stay

Darkness spread by shadow’s claw
Slowly it grows, swells and consumes
Hiding no more from fear of light
Its time arrives, it casts aside law

I step into night’s comforting embrace
The light air sooths my pain away
My veins flow anew with fluid chilled
My body engulfed by its soft satin lace

In the absence of law the truly wise learn
In the midst of chaos one lesson is taught
To conquer the night, so as to learn more
I pray for the sun to seldom return

[YahNe]

Sveet. I left a comment, happy?

[eldradir]

*glares*

[Akuma Ookami]

I think you're other one's better... But, this one is kool too.

[eldradir]

Really? I actualy like this one more than the other one... Oh well, that's the joy of personal taste ;D

I'm probably just sick to death of the other one ... Yep, that explains it