Post by Fractured Princess on Oct 14, 2006 13:13:47 GMT 10
Okay well I'm not sure how many of you have actually read "The Hollow" in Original RP, but it's what Yahne and I are working on. Well either way I just figured that if you were honestly interested in that particular story then you may be interested to read what it originally was.
Well about a month before I started work on "The Hollow" I was on the computer one day during a mildly creative mood, and I began to write something, just something. And it came out pretty okay. But it wasn't long enough for my liking and I couldn't see where it was going, so I stopped writting. Then I was up late one night with nothing to do; I was very bored. As I was on this site I decided to start a new Original RP, even if it turned out as a story with only me as it's author. Well I started to write and it seemed pretty good... So I kept going. Eventually I stopped and read over it; Seeing as I'd liked my story from before I'd written "The Hollow" with much the same beginning. I liked it more and had forgotten all about "Blah". Well anyway, I was looking through my documents today, cleaning them all out, deleting things and suuch, and I came across "Blah" and thought to myself "Hmmm... That's where it got to. I want to delete this because I no longer need it... But perhaps others may want to read it." So here you all go. Here is the great story "Blah"... Or lack of
.
Enjoy. ^^
A chilly wind swept in through the open window, blowing the white blonde hair from the girls face as she stood outside the sill. The ground was far below her, the streets were abandoned as it was finally dark; 2 or 3 o’ clock in the morning would be a good estimate.
Her mother slept in the other room as she stood on the edge of a knife. The question lingered... Jump, or not.
The black silk night-dress clung to her body, the skirts flying out at the back. Her white lace curtains tossed in a furious dance as her television screen buzzed and crashed. The lights all flickered on and off and ordainments on her dresser began to shake.
A scream rang out across the night and reverberated off the Minster in front of her apartment.
Well about a month before I started work on "The Hollow" I was on the computer one day during a mildly creative mood, and I began to write something, just something. And it came out pretty okay. But it wasn't long enough for my liking and I couldn't see where it was going, so I stopped writting. Then I was up late one night with nothing to do; I was very bored. As I was on this site I decided to start a new Original RP, even if it turned out as a story with only me as it's author. Well I started to write and it seemed pretty good... So I kept going. Eventually I stopped and read over it; Seeing as I'd liked my story from before I'd written "The Hollow" with much the same beginning. I liked it more and had forgotten all about "Blah". Well anyway, I was looking through my documents today, cleaning them all out, deleting things and suuch, and I came across "Blah" and thought to myself "Hmmm... That's where it got to. I want to delete this because I no longer need it... But perhaps others may want to read it." So here you all go. Here is the great story "Blah"... Or lack of
.Enjoy. ^^
A chilly wind swept in through the open window, blowing the white blonde hair from the girls face as she stood outside the sill. The ground was far below her, the streets were abandoned as it was finally dark; 2 or 3 o’ clock in the morning would be a good estimate.
Her mother slept in the other room as she stood on the edge of a knife. The question lingered... Jump, or not.
The black silk night-dress clung to her body, the skirts flying out at the back. Her white lace curtains tossed in a furious dance as her television screen buzzed and crashed. The lights all flickered on and off and ordainments on her dresser began to shake.
A scream rang out across the night and reverberated off the Minster in front of her apartment.